Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Right after the Second World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still, there were bills for them to pay—four children to care for and food to buy. Life was hard for them at that time.

After the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.

“Do you think the Germans could rebuild their homeland?”

“Absolutely.”

“But I can’t see any hope for the country at all. How can you be so certain about that?”

“Have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at such moment, hasn’t forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can create miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 以約120個(gè)詞就夢想改變命運(yùn)的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：

(1) 你贊同文中的觀點(diǎn)嗎？

(2) 舉例證明你贊同或不贊同的原因；

(3) 談?wù)勀銓�夢想的看法以及你如何為�?shí)現(xiàn)夢想而努力。

【寫作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.

As is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties and live his dream. Therefore, I agree that dreams can change one’s life. Take my friend Tom for example. In Senior One, he was an energetic boy who was always dreaming of becoming a player in the school basketball team. However, at the beginning almost everyone persuaded him out of his dream because he was no more than 1.65 meters tall. However, he didn’t lose heart. With determination, he devoted himself to playing basketball after class and became good at it. Now he is a successful basketball player in our school Team.

From my point of view, dreams play an important part in changing my life. To realize my dream, first of all, I should focus my effort on my studies. In addition, when faced with failure, I choose never to give up. Last but not least, I should develop such skills as problem-solving ability and communication skill.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇議論式的作文。文章給出了一篇短文和作文要求，這給考生提供了比較明確的背景和可參考的依據(jù)。考生需要發(fā)揮想象、展開思維，把文章內(nèi)容寫的具體、鮮活并且要有說服力。成文時(shí)要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時(shí)態(tài)：靈活變換；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞和插入語，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，150單詞左右。