Question

進(jìn)入高中以來，同學(xué)們倍感學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，壓力大。許多同學(xué)爭分奪秒甚至連課間十分鐘的休息時間也花在學(xué)習(xí)上。針對這一現(xiàn)象，請以A Ten-minute Break為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文，短文的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點(diǎn)
1.十分鐘的課間休息是必要的
2.要注意休息的方式
3.我通常是怎樣利用這十分鐘的
  As students of Senior Middle school, we have to study from early morning till late evening.                                                                      
                                                                              

Answer 1

As students of Senior Grade Three, we have to study from early morning till late evening. With great pressure, many of us grasp every minute to study, even a ten-minute break.
Therefore to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important and necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.
During the ten-minute break we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest instead of getting more tired
My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercises, such as a free chat or a walk with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again

本文討論的內(nèi)容是學(xué)生非常熟悉的，具有很強(qiáng)的可寫性。文章的要點(diǎn)并不是很清晰，需要考生自己梳理，屬于半開放性的作文。在寫這篇文章時，一定要注意謀篇布局，列出自己要寫的要點(diǎn)，在第三點(diǎn)上可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的句型如強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，倒裝句之類，讓文章更有檔次。