Question

假設(shè)你是張華，是某中學(xué)的高三寄宿生。面對(duì)目前的學(xué)習(xí)壓力，想和家中的父母交流，感謝他們對(duì)你的愛(ài)與鼓勵(lì)，告訴他們你的學(xué)習(xí)、思想近況及考前打算。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)封短信發(fā)到你父母的QQ郵箱上。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)任何與考生有關(guān)的具體信息。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the college entrance examination drawing near, how I wish I could have a face-to-face conversation with you, but
Your loving son，
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the college entrance examination drawing near, how I wish I could have a face-to-face conversation with you, but I have been busy preparing for the coming exam, so what I can do is to tell you something about myself in the email.
Thanks to your frequent encouragement and unselfish love, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. It will be only two months before I take the exam, about which I’m feeling greatly stressed. So I need your continuous support and better understanding.
I have made a detailed study schedule for the coming exam, which I have been carrying out as planned. Believe in me and I can manage to deal with the problems both in my study and in my life. I’m confident of achieving success in the exam and you will be proud of me.
Take care of yourselves.
Your loving son，
Zhang Hua

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，內(nèi)容很容易把握�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是學(xué)生和父母交流近期的學(xué)習(xí)情況，心里狀態(tài)及考前打算，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，必須用第一人稱。材料只是一個(gè)提綱，告訴你寫(xiě)出哪方面的內(nèi)容，具體內(nèi)容必須自己把握。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中兩次使用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)have been doing突出了一直在為考生做準(zhǔn)備 ,一直在進(jìn)步。還運(yùn)用重點(diǎn)句型：what 名詞性從句，it will be ……before……句型，which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，為文章增色不少，并注意了句子的銜接如：,so