Question

感恩，是我們生活中永恒的話題。學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會熱愛生活，我們將會感受到更多快樂。假設(shè)你將參加主題為“感恩”的演講比賽，請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇英語演講稿。

要點：

1. 感恩對象（父母、老師、朋友…）；

2. 為何感恩；

3. 如何感恩。

注意：

1. 只能選擇一個感恩對象；

2. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is

“Thank you, ___________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”

My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement. She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m very grateful to have such a caring mother.

Now, I have a message for everyone here, including myself: since we have grown up, we children should try to repay our dear mum instead of always trying to receive something from her. We can help her as she helps us. Sometimes even a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her will shine her through.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于演講稿，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、要依據(jù)提示信息或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以加入個人真實情感，旨在感情飽滿，打動觀眾。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement.是非限制性定語從句且用動詞ing作狀語。She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily是賓語從句；She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible.運用平行結(jié)構(gòu)；whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up.讓步狀語從句等。此外，文章還使用了大量短語和詞組have the opportunity to… , devotes oneself to , look after，make sure，as…as possible，On top of that，cheer up等使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

考點：考查演講稿寫作

考點分析： 考點1：提綱作文 試題屬性

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