【題目】假如你是英語科代表李華，我校外教 Chris今年來到我校任教，由于不太適應(yīng)北京的生活，加之工作壓力比較大，缺乏時(shí)間鍛煉身體，Chris 生病住院了，請(qǐng)你代表你們班同學(xué)給他寫一份英文信，信件包括：

1．表示對(duì)他的思念和感謝

2. 提出建議（至少三條）

3．希望他早日康復(fù)

注意：1）字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100

2） 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫

Dear Chris,

I’m sorry to hear that you have been in hospital for several days._____________

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I’m sorry to hear that you have been in hospital for several days. I am writing this letter on behalf of the whole class, who deeply miss you and care you. We are grateful for everything you’ve done for us.

Actually, it is very easy for a person like you to get sick, who hasn’t adapted to the new environment, suffers from great pressure and lacks exercise. Here are some tips for you:

First of all, it is a good idea to take part in some social activities, which will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures, so as to get used to the new environment. In addition, you should try to reduce the working pressure by listening to music and making more friends. Last but not least, you’d better exercise more instead of sitting in the office all the time.

Hope our advice would help you lead a healthy lifestyle and hope you would recover soon!

Looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：假如你是英語科代表李華，我校外教 Chris今年來到我校任教，由于不太適應(yīng)北京的生活，加之工作壓力比較大，缺乏時(shí)間鍛煉身體，Chris 生病住院了，請(qǐng)你代表你們班同學(xué)給他寫一份英文信，表示對(duì)他的思念和感謝，提出建議（至少三條），希望他早日康復(fù)等。具體信息已經(jīng)給出，考生只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，但要注意，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)是要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。在寫作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，并且運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式。讓句子富于變化。

Ps:書信表達(dá)格式：1.稱呼（標(biāo)點(diǎn)為逗號(hào)）2.正文（開頭空四個(gè)字節(jié)寫，注意分段）3.（期待回信）結(jié)束語，祝福語 4.謙稱，簽名。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文的書信表達(dá)格式正確，且全面覆蓋了具體要求，感情真摯，值得借鑒。第一段表達(dá)了對(duì)外教的關(guān)心、思念和感謝，解釋了寫信的原因。第二段、第三段給外教因工作壓力、不適應(yīng)等因素而生病提出了幾點(diǎn)幫助的建議，實(shí)際可操作性強(qiáng)。第三段祝福外教早日康復(fù)�？忌话憧赡軙�(huì)從題文的提示開始寫，然后再寫具體的要求，然而這篇文章講外教生病住院的原因交代放在了第二段，也就是建議之前，巧妙而自然，結(jié)構(gòu)上的調(diào)整讓人眼前一亮。本文的高級(jí)句型結(jié)構(gòu)、短語以及連接詞也運(yùn)用得恰當(dāng)好處。短句或句型如：on behalf of（代表）、be grateful for（對(duì)..感到感激）、adapt to（適應(yīng)）、suffer from（遭受）、it is a good idea to ..(..是個(gè)好主意)、take part in（參加）、get used to（習(xí)慣于）、looking forward to doing(期待做..)、instead of(代替)、you’d better(你最好是..)。連詞如：first of all, in addition，last but not least等。文章也多次用到了非限制性定語從句1.I am writing this letter on behalf of the whole class, who deeply miss you and care you.2. it is very easy for a person like you to get sick, who hasn’t adapted to the new environment.等，非限制性定于從句與短句結(jié)合在一起，使得文章句式富于變化。

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