Question

12．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以"老人摔倒你會(huì)扶嗎？"為主題的班會(huì)調(diào)查結(jié)果及你自已的意見(jiàn)給《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，要點(diǎn)如下：

調(diào)查結(jié)果	理由
1.80%的人認(rèn)為會(huì)扶	救人第一
2.15%的人認(rèn)為不一定會(huì)扶	看情況
3.5%的人認(rèn)為不會(huì)扶	不懂急救；怕惹事

注意：
    1．總詞數(shù)不少于100；2．開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Ladies and gentlemen，
Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street？A recent survey from our class meeting shows that______________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 句型一．A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things 一項(xiàng)最近的調(diào)查表明80%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為他們確性要幫組摔倒的老人因?yàn)橥炀壬�命是最重要的事情．show的賓語(yǔ)從句"that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things"中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞think的賓語(yǔ)從句為"they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street"
句型二．if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old．如果這種事情當(dāng)我們老了的一天發(fā)生在我們身上．when we were old是定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞one day．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
     Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street？A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things （句型一）．Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances．However，five percent hold the view that the old shouldn't be helped．（對(duì)于表格中的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行闡述）
    Why not？First，they lack the knowledge of first aid，not knowing how to deal with the situation．Second，they are afraid of getting into trouble．（分析原因）
    In my opinion，we should help each other，especially the old people．Please remember"respect the old"is one of our best traditions．Everyone will become old，and if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old（句型二），I will say I do need your help．Thank you!（闡明觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 表格式英語(yǔ)作文一般是在表格中給出一定的內(nèi)容和情景，要求寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文．它屬于控制型寫(xiě)作的范疇．歷年高考都有此類型的作文，可算是高考作文類型中的"不倒翁"． 本文屬于提綱短文，話題為："老人摔倒你會(huì)扶嗎？"同時(shí)這也是一篇議論文，使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)． 首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides，further，last but not least等．在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．