Question

請根據以下提示，并結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.

注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

除詩歌外，文體不限；

詞數為120左右。

 

Answer 1

The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.

I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.

Life full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, bur you can change your attitude.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫作的時候注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如depend on，be full of，escape from，What’s more, With the help of sb. , to one’s surprise, make great progress , not … but …；并注意了句子的銜接如：but，Although，so，before等等。

考點：提綱類寫作