Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim和你都喜歡閱讀，最近他在郵件中提出想與和你分享讀書心得。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，向他介紹你喜歡的一本勵(lì)志的書籍。內(nèi)容包括：

1.該書的書名；

2.該書的主要內(nèi)容；

3.該書對(duì)你的影響。

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；

2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

It’s great to hear from you. It’s really a good idea for us to share our favourite books with each other.

My favourite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith. It tells the story of Francie Nolan, an adolescent girl who grows up in a poor immigrant family in Brooklyn. Her mother favors her little brother, while his father is always drunk. Life is hard for her. However, reading brings her great pleasure. Thanks to the books, she finds a way to endure poverty and loneliness, surviving all the difficulties and challenges.

What I’ve learned from this book is that though life is tough sometimes, as long as we’re determined to rise above difficult circumstances, life can be hopeful and colorful. This book encourages me to keep optimistic about life and gives me courage to face difficulties. It certainly deserves to read.

Looking forward to learning about your favourite book.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，成文時(shí)要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全：（1）該書的書名；（2）該書的主要內(nèi)容；（3）該書對(duì)你的影響。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，50單詞左右。

亮點(diǎn)說明：本文是一篇回信，格式正確，銜接緊密，布局合理，使用高級(jí)句子。It’s really a good idea for us to share our favourite books with each other. 動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語；My favourite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith.過去分詞作后置定語；Her mother favors her little brother, while his father is always drunk. While引導(dǎo)并列句；However, reading brings her great pleasure.動(dòng)名詞作主語；she finds a way to endure poverty and loneliness, surviving all the difficulties and challenges. 現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語；What I’ve learned from this book is that though life is tough sometimes, as long as we’re determined to rise above difficult circumstances, life can be hopeful and colorful. What引導(dǎo)的主語從句和as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句完美結(jié)合；另外，However, Thanks to the books的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。