Question

8．假設(shè)你是濟(jì)寧一中高三學(xué)生李華，最近收到高一時(shí)的外教Angel女士的電子郵件，詢問你及學(xué)校的情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一封回信，主要介紹你及你校的變化：
1．你的情況：正備戰(zhàn)高考，忙且累，但不乏快樂；
2．學(xué)校情況：已遷入現(xiàn)代化新校區(qū)（campus），環(huán)境優(yōu)美，多數(shù)同學(xué)住校．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：高考the National College Entrance Examination 住校live on campus．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件．向高一時(shí)的外教Angel女士介紹自己的情況及學(xué)校的變化．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．介紹自己的情況； 2．介紹學(xué)校的變化．
重要短語：hear from （收到…的來信），take place （發(fā)生），be busy doing sth （忙于做某事），prepare for （準(zhǔn)備），enjoy oneself（玩得開心），as to （關(guān)于），be equipped with …（裝備，配備），highly-advanced facilities（先進(jìn)的設(shè)施），choose to do sth （選擇做某物），be far from （遠(yuǎn)離…），be located in（位于…）．
【高分句型】
1．About ten times the size of the old campus，the new school has modern buildings equipped with highly-advanced facilities．
此句中有倍數(shù)關(guān)系的表達(dá)法，結(jié)構(gòu)為"A+be+多少倍+the+size+of+B"．
過去分詞短語"equipped with"作"buildings"的后置定語，固定短語"sth be equipped with …裝備，配備"．
2．Located nearby a lake and away from the downtown area，it is a nice place to live and study．
這里是由過去分詞短語作原因狀語，主句為"it is a nice place to live and study"，主句的主語為"it"，固定短語"sth be located+地點(diǎn)   位于…"．

解答 Dear Angel，
     Thanks for your email and it's so nice to hearfrom you．     Some majorchanges have taken place both in my life and to my school．I'm now in Senior Grade 3，busy preparing for theNational College Entrance Examination．Although much more tired every day than we were in Grade 1，my friends and I can stillfind time to enjoy ourselves．（介紹自己的情況）
As to the school，we moved to a newly-builtcampus only last year．About ten times the size of the old campus，the new school has modern buildings equipped withhighly-advanced facilities．【高分句型】Located nearby a lake andaway from the downtown area，it is a nice place to live and study．【高分句型】As the school is a bit far from home，most of the students chooseto live on campus．（介紹學(xué)校的變化）
I hope someday you'll come again and visit our school．You'll love it!
Your friend'
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．