Question

第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
When I was a little girl ,my mother always told me what I should do and not .What I can remember is that when I was in the primary school, I didn’t want to go to school because I hated the math teacher who used to punish me for I didn’t finish my homework on time. Instead of forcing me to go to school, my mother just told me if I didn’t go to school my friends and my teachers would not like me anymore. What’s more, she told me I should not hate the math teacher on account of my fault and never hate anybody if I wanted to be likable. Since that time, I have known that being likable is very important.
While I was growing up, I read a lot of books in order to be a likable person. There is a famous writer, Dale Carnegie. He wrote a book called How to Win Friends and Influence People, which taught me a lot .Being a likable person we should respect others and become genuinely interested in other people. In my opinion, the most significant one is that we should be honest and sincere. The second way is that we should be glad to give them a hand when it is needed. Finally, I suppose that being a good listener is quite important as well. We should participate in their suffering and encourage them in time.
In a word, only if we stand by the people even when they are in the darkest time and never desert them can we be a likable in the social life.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1) 以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；
2) 然后以約120個(gè)詞就“做個(gè)受歡迎的人”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
A ) 以自己或他人的經(jīng)歷為例談?wù)勗鯓硬拍艿玫絼e人的認(rèn)可。
B ) 你認(rèn)為如何才能使自己受歡迎，為什么？
[寫作要求]
1) 可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2) 標(biāo)題自定
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。
[寫作要求]
1.   作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.   作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]                  概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

Answer 1

The author relates to us how he realized the importance of being likable through his experience. Besides, Carnegie’s book confirms him of the essence of being likable: modesty, sincerity, honesty and helpfulness. (32 words)
I remember clearly how I change my attitude towards the most popular girl, Cathy. At first, I was jealous of her because of her popularity. But one incident made me admire her.  As a guy pursuing uniqueness, I always wore a strange hat to school, which aroused the others’ dislike. But she wrote a diary posted on our wallpaper to support my eccentricity. In it, she expressed her understanding and asked our classmates to focus more on my genuineness than my strange appearance. Since then, I regard her as my confidant.
It is evident that to be a likable person, one needs to show interest and understanding towards others. First, be concerned with what others are passionate about. Then another significant quality for a popular person is to remember what’s important to people. In addition, to gain likability, one should not grudge complimentary words to friends. (146 words)

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