Question

15．身體是革命的本錢，可中學(xué)生目前的健康狀況讓人十分堪憂．家長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校，專家憂心忡忡．于是有人獻(xiàn)良策將體育納入高考．請(qǐng)結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勀愕目捶�，作短文一篇，將其發(fā)表．
注意：
1 短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3 文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)．
The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就將體育納入高考這件事．談?wù)勎覀兊目捶�，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：身體是革命的本錢，可中學(xué)生目前的健康狀況讓人十分堪憂．家長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校，專家憂心忡忡．于是有人獻(xiàn)良策將體育納入高考．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為總體介紹將體育納入高考這件事．第二部分為我的看法．第三部分為學(xué)校應(yīng)采取的措施．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be  against反對(duì)
 by no means 決不
 it is one's responsibility to do sth做某事是某人的職責(zé)
provide sth for sb 為某人提供某物
高分句型一：The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts此句用了that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination．此句用了propose虛擬語(yǔ)氣，should 可省略．
高分句型三：Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．
                       此句only+介詞短語(yǔ)，主句部分倒裝

解答 The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．（ 高分句型一）To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination..（ 高分句型二）（總體介紹將體育納入高考這件事）
I'm against the idea because it is by no means practical．Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．
However，good health is an essential foundation of learning．Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．（ 高分句型三）．（我的看法）
Therefore，it is schools'responsibility to help develop their students'awareness of the importance of keeping fit．Moreover，schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise．（學(xué)校應(yīng)采取的措施）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．