Question

10．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
　　People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate．You can set the example by becoming the person that people want to be like．You can help change the world by changing yourself．
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　�、蹆�(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例；
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　�、菰~數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文，寫作時注意以下幾點：1．準確理解這句話People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate．You can set the example by becoming the person that people want to be like．You can help change the world by changing yourself．2、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：follow the example of 學習…的榜樣，照…的樣子；效仿；can't help doing sth．忍不住做某事；look down upon 輕視，看不起；day by day 一天一天地；
Such is human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life，holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol．（高分句型一） 
Having failed the entrance exam，I was admitted to an ordinary high school，which disappointed me a lot．（高分句型二）

解答 Such is human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life，holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol．（高分句型一） However，we can set the example by changing ourselves and becoming the person we want to be．
    I can't help recalling the time when I first entered high school．Having failed the entrance exam，I was admitted to an ordinary high school，which disappointed me a lot．（高分句型二）I was very bitter and rude，looking down upon everyone at school．Then one day I told myself I couldn't be like this any longer．Maybe I shouldn't look for someone to admire but should change myself first．I tried to improve myself a bit and tried to be friendlier to others．As a result，I found myself a lot happier and I was even awarded the title of"Excellent Student"at the end of term．
     Life is a constant exercise in self-improvement．Changing yourself to a better self is definitely better than looking for someone better to imitate．Change yourself，and you will make the earth a better world day by day．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧