Question

14．假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試（美國高考），心理壓力很大，很苦惱，希望得到你的幫助．請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．安慰對方；
2．分析心理壓力過大可能導(dǎo)致的后果；
3．給出相應(yīng)的建議及其理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
           2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence．Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory
但不要擔心太多，否則你會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己有睡眠、食欲甚至記憶問題，．
高分句型二：
It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．
與一個好的聽眾的人說話是一個好主意；有人聽你的問題會讓你感覺更好．

解答 Possible version
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory（高分句型一）．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence．Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better（高分句型二）．
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．