Question

18．假如你是貴安三中學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校擬選拔一些優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑假到貴安實(shí)驗(yàn)小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語．你希望參加此活動．請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給學(xué)校評選組寫一封申請信：
對此活動的認(rèn)識（對本人、學(xué)生和社會的益處等）
個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）
你的計(jì)劃（如將怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于100字，可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
參考生詞：Guian No.3 senior high school，Guian Exprimental primary school
Dear Sir or Madam：
I'm Li hua from Guian No.3 Senior High School，．
                                                                      
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)敘述對此活動的認(rèn)識以及個人優(yōu)勢；用一般將來時敘述本人的計(jì)劃．內(nèi)容包括：一表明寫信目的；二對此活動的認(rèn)識以及個人優(yōu)勢；三本人的計(jì)劃；四表示期盼．
高分句型：
1．On the one hand，I think the voluntary work can build up my confidence，develop good ability of social gatherings and broaden my horizons．句子里．On the one hand和后面的On the other hand呼應(yīng)，表示"一方面…另一方面"；build up my confidence表示"增強(qiáng)我的自信"；develop good ability of social gatherings 表示"發(fā)展良好的社交能力"；broaden my horizons表示"拓寬我的視野"．
一方面，我認(rèn)為志愿者的工作可以增強(qiáng)我的自信；發(fā)展良好的社交能力；拓寬我的視野．
2．I'm looking forward to your reply at your most convenience．句子里looking forward to 表示"盼望著"；at your most convenience表示"在你最便利的時候"．
我期盼你在便利是時候能給我回復(fù)．～

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
      I am Li Hua from Guian No.3 Senior High School．I'm confident that I'm suitable for the kind of the job you are providing．（表明寫信目的）
      On the one hand，I think the voluntary work can build up my confidence，develop good ability of social gatherings and broaden my horizons．【高分句型一】But most importantly，I would like to do something for the children in Guian Experimental Primary School in need．On the other hand，I'm an active boy with the ability to live independently．I am i nterested in and good at English．（對此活動的認(rèn)識以及個人優(yōu)勢）
       My plan can be seen as follows．First，I will teach the children to sing English songs．Besides，I will often go to the English Corner with them to practice their spoken English．In addition，I will tell them English Corner with them to practice their spoken English．What's more，I will tell them English stories．（本人的計(jì)劃）
I'm looking forward to your reply at your most convenience．【高分句型二】（表示期盼）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
書面表達(dá)試題一般都由"情景"和"要求"兩部分構(gòu)成．"情景"中包括所寫材料的目的、對象、時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等，一般在書面表達(dá)題的前半部分；而"要求"一般在書面表達(dá)的后半部分，以"注意"形式給出，實(shí)際上是對考生提出的要求．因而考生對于題目所提供的說明，應(yīng)認(rèn)真分析、反復(fù)推敲，搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求，抓住所要表達(dá)的信息點(diǎn)．