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12．假設(shè)你是山東某所中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，向某英語報社投稿，呼吁大家植樹造林，保護環(huán)境：
 1．過去家鄉(xiāng)樹木成林；
 2．如今人們毀林種地建房；
 3．氣候變化，土地荒漠化，遭受沙塵暴襲擊；
 4．植樹造林，保護環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)．
 注意：1．詞數(shù)：100字左右．
       2．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
 Dear Editor，
     I'm a student at a middle school of Shandong．_____________________
                                                              Yours，
                                                          Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，用英語寫一篇短文，呼吁大家植樹造林，保護環(huán)境．內(nèi)容包括：1．過去家鄉(xiāng)樹木成林；2．如今人們毀林種地建房；3．氣候變化，土地荒漠化，遭受沙塵暴襲擊；4．植樹造林，保護環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：influence（影響）； attack（襲擊）；duty（責(zé)任）；in the past（過去）；cultivation（耕作；耕種）；responsibility（責(zé)任）
高分句型：1．①Having been deeply influenced by the sandstorm ②which had attacked the northern part of Shandong Province，I feel ③it is our duty to plant trees and protect the environment．
                 ①現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中作狀語；②which引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾先行詞the sandstorm；③it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式短語．
                 2．Therefore，we should all know①that ②it's our responsibility to plant trees．
                  ①that從句作動詞know的賓語；②it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式短語．

解答 Dear editor：
I'm a student at a middle school．
Having been deeply influenced by the sandstorm which had attacked the northern part of Shandong Province，I feel it is our duty to plant trees and protect the environment（高分句型一）．There were many trees here in the past，but now people destroy the woods to develop more fields for cultivation．Then，the climate changed and the desertification became serious．Therefore，we should all know that it's our responsibility to plant trees（高分句型二）．

點評 本題為提綱類寫作，這類作文一般規(guī)定了寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．