Question

假設(shè)你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言。

要點(diǎn)：1. 簡(jiǎn)要表述李華在你心目中的印象；

　　　2. 用一到兩個(gè)相關(guān)的事例進(jìn)行具體描述；

　　　3. 對(duì)他李華表示美好的的祝愿。

注意：1. 內(nèi)容積極向上，語(yǔ)意連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。詞數(shù)120左右。

????? 2. 不能寫成詩(shī)歌形式；不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

????? 3. 開頭已給出。

Dear Li Hua,

?? It’s time to say goodbye. ________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

?? It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.

?? Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.

?? I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!

??????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,

???????????????????????????????????????????????????? Wang Ping

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，重點(diǎn)考查考生的書面表達(dá)的能力。畢業(yè)留言的話題應(yīng)該是中學(xué)生熟悉，有話可寫的素材，因此難度并不大。把握三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1.簡(jiǎn)要表述李華在你心目中的印象;2.用一到兩個(gè)相關(guān)的事例進(jìn)行具體描述; 3.對(duì)他李華表示美好的的祝愿。注意組織鍛煉和過(guò)渡�？忌�在寫作時(shí)，一定要緊扣寫作要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)都十分重要，如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上，抓住語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性，再寫出幾個(gè)亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句式，得到高分應(yīng)該比較輕松。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言流暢，句式變化多樣：It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. 這句話用了固定句型和定語(yǔ)從句，You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和省略句，You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句， When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. 這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句， Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. 這句話用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣， May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!這兩句話都用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)