Question

假設你是李華，在出國交流學習期間，到當?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓鼍�彩的電影，但在觀影過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。

1．因廣告過多，影片放映晚點；2．影片播放音量過大；3．安全出口標識不明，存在安全隱患；

4．適當結(jié)尾。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100～120； 2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．信的開頭已為你寫好(不計入詞數(shù))。

參考詞匯：安全出口—exit 安全隱患—potential safety hazard

Dear Manager,

I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but……

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Manager,

I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.

First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Secondly, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly hear it. Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.

As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設你是李華，在出國交流學習期間，到當?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓鼍�彩的電影，但在觀影過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。1．因廣告過多，影片放映晚點；2．影片播放音量過大；3．安全出口標識不明，存在安全隱患；4．適當結(jié)尾。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100～120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.

這里含有一個原因狀語從句；Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。

考點：提綱類書面表達