Question

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( ∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ＼）劃掉。
修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2、只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.

Answer 1

【小題1】there was 改為there were
【小題2】cry 改為 crying
【小題3】can’t 改為couldn’t
【小題4】try 改為 tried
【小題5】find 前加 to
【小題6】on the same time 改為at the same time
【小題7】careful 改為carefully
【小題8】his mother 改為her mother
【小題9】happily改為 happy
【小題10】with劃掉

解析試題分析：上周日下午，我和莉莉去動物園。動物園里有很多人，我看到一個小女孩在哭，原來她迷路了，找不到媽媽了。于是我們決定幫助她找到她媽媽。我和莉莉分頭行動，我去找到動物園的廣播處廣播，而莉莉則陪小女孩一起玩。在我們的幫助下，小女孩回到了媽媽身邊。
【小題1】考查主謂一致。There was lots of people there。 There be 句型中be動詞在人稱、數(shù)上要和后面的名詞保持一致，所以把was 改為were。
【小題2】考查非謂語動詞。I found a girl cry in the zoo cry 。find sb doing sth，其中賓語和 賓補(bǔ)是主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞，所以把cry改為 crying。
【小題3】考查動詞時態(tài)。She was lost and she can’t find her mother根據(jù)語境可知此處是表示過去，所以把 can’t 改為couldn’t。
【小題4】考查動詞時態(tài)。I try my best find the broadcasting station。根據(jù)文章時態(tài)判斷此處是過去時，所以把 try 改為 tried。
【小題5】考查非謂語動詞。I try my best find the broadcasting station。固定短語“try one’s best to do ”意思是“努力做某事”，所以在find前加to。
【小題6】考查固定短語。On the same time Lily played with her。固定短語 at the same time“同時”，所以把on 改為at  。
【小題7】考查副詞用法。Lily played with her and looked after her careful there。修飾動詞短語look after 應(yīng)該用副詞，所以把careful 改為carefully。
【小題8】考查代詞用法。At last his mother came.根據(jù)上文可知此處是指小女孩的媽媽，所以把his 改為her 。
【小題9】考查形容詞用法。That made me feel very happily. Feel 是系動詞后面跟形容詞做表語，所以把happily改為 happy 。
【小題10】考查動詞用法。If everyone helps with each other。help是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，不需要介詞，所以把介詞with去掉。
考點：考查短文改錯。