Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你班外教Mr.Smith任教期滿即將回美國。全班同學(xué)為他挑選了一個具有中國特色的禮物。作為班長，你代表全班同學(xué)把禮物贈送給他，并給他留了一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.感激之情；2.禮物寓意；3.美好祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, monitor of the class. Hearing that you are leaving China soon, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude to you for your excellent work representing the class.

Thanks to your generous help as well as your great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Mr. Smith, here’s a Chinese knot, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This knot stands for reunion, friendship, love and good fortune. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together.

Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy! Please remember that you are always welcome to come back to visit us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假定你是李華，你班外教Mr.Smith任教期滿即將回美國。全班同學(xué)為他挑選了一個具有中國特色的禮物。作為班長，你代表全班同學(xué)把禮物贈送給他，并給他留了一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.感激之情；2.禮物寓意；3.美好祝愿。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：monitor of the class（這個班的班長）；express our sincere gratitude to you（向你表達(dá)我們真摯的謝意）；be of great importance to our further study（對我們的進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)很重要）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。