Question

11．2012年中秋、國慶雙節(jié)齊至，加上高速免費(fèi)政策，人們紛紛駕車回家或出游，高速公路的交通壓力倍增．
下圖是一幅反映長假期間交通堵塞問題的漫畫．請根據(jù)你對這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文．短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．這幅漫畫描述了什么內(nèi)容？=2．產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些？
3．你對解決這個問題有何建議？（至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：
1．根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容和文字提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象．
2．詞數(shù)120左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
提示詞：高速免費(fèi)政策toll-free road policy
During the Mid-autumn Festival and National Day，many people experienced heavy traffic jams on expressways．         ．

Answer 1

分析 是一篇看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，從圖畫中看出反映的問題，寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：During the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day，many people experienced heavy took advantage of the long holiday to go home or visit tourist spots，which caused traffic overcrowding．在中秋節(jié)和國慶節(jié)期間，不少人體驗(yàn)到了利用長假回家或游覽景點(diǎn)，這造成交通擁堵．本句是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前文中整個句子的意思．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：People caught in jams killed time in different ways．被困的人以不同的方式消磨時間．本句中過去分詞caught in jams是過去分詞在句中做定語修飾people．

解答 During the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day，many people experienced heavy took advantage of the long holiday to go home or visit tourist spots，which caused traffic overcrowding．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）People caught in jams killed time in different ways．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Some were reading．Some were chatting．Some others were just complaining．There are several reasons for traffic jams．Firstly，with the development of economy，the number of cars has been increasing faster than expected．Secondly，more people prefer to travel in private cars instead of on public transport．Thirdly，the toll-free road policy encourages people to enjoy the benefit．How shall we deal with the traffic problem？As far as I'm concerned，the government had better abandon all the tolls．The administration should improve the present traffic system and provide constantly updated traffic information．It will also help for traffic to avoid the rush time or the most crowded roads．

點(diǎn)評 看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來提供目的、對象、時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等場景，要求作者借助圖畫，通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容，從寫作體裁上看，可說明介紹，可敘事記人，可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論．看圖作文主要考查學(xué)生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語言表達(dá)能力．