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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)畫掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When Mr and Mrs Smith went to theatre，they left their German dog to guard his home.When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang，the dog was waiting for them.Unfortunately，one of the burglars was dog－lover，and he quickly made friends with it.While the alarm was ringing，but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe，the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep.When the police arrived at twenty minutes later，the burglars had gone.The dog was proudly guarded the empty safe.When the first policeman entered into the room，it immediately attacked him，tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.theatre是可數(shù)單數(shù)名詞，前面加冠詞，此處是特指，應該用the.故加上the.

2.根據(jù)語境可知，句子的主語是they，把他們的狗留下看家。此處表示“他們的”家。故把his改為their.

3.breakinto與breakin都作“闖入;強行進入;破門而入”之意時的區(qū)別如下:breakinto是及物動詞短語,后面要接賓語，此句后面沒有賓語應該用break in.故把into改為in.

4.dog-lover是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，此處是泛指，dog讀音是以輔音開頭，所以前面加上不定冠詞a.故加上a.

5.句中While the alarm was ringing，but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe都是狀語從句，句中“the alarm was ringing”與“the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe”兩個分句之間是并列關系，應該用and.故把but改為and.

6.此處表示躺下休息，用lie down，lie譯為“躺”的過去式為lay.故把laid改為lay.

7.arrive at后面跟時間點表示到達的時間，此處twenty minutes later是時間狀語，arrive不及物動詞，作謂語，at多余。故把at省去。

8.主語the dog與guard之間是主動關系，此句用過去進行時，故把guarded改為guarding.

9.enter是及物動詞，直接跟名詞作賓語，故把into省去。

10.tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg是and連接兩個伴隨狀語，bite與邏輯主語dog之間是主動，應該用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，故把bit改為biting.