Question

17．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
每個(gè)人在生活中都有被錯(cuò)怪或冤枉的經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)講述一個(gè)你的故事并談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的感受或看法．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放式作文．講述生活中被錯(cuò)怪或冤枉的一次經(jīng)歷并闡述感受或看法．
寫作要點(diǎn)：描述經(jīng)歷，闡述想法．寫作時(shí)人稱用第一和第三人稱．時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．重要短語(yǔ)：have a conversation with （值得信賴的同伴），moved on to …（轉(zhuǎn)到…），to my surprise （使某人驚訝的是），disconcerting （使人窘迫的），refute（駁斥），focus on…（集中…），moot（無(wú)實(shí)際意義的…），in isolation（孤立地）．

解答 Recently，I had a conversation with a friend about a tax referendum．When my friend asked me to explain my position，I expressed my thoughts in at least four main points．We then moved on to other topics of conversation．（引出主題．）
To my surprise，a few days later，I got a message from him stating that he thought my view on the issue was disconcerting and went on refuting what he described as my view on the subject．【高分句型】
As I continued to read，my anger level started to rise．What he was talking about was not what I had said．He took my words out of context and formed an entire argument by focusing on one point which may seem moot in isolation．【高分句型】（舉例）
No matter how you want to be seen，people will always mishear，misunderstand and misinterpret your words and your actions．【高分句型】But forgive them，for how can they understand in exactly the way you want them to？They are absolutely free to understand in the way they do．（總結(jié)升華）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 類似這種開放式作文可遵循以下寫作步驟：首段：議論，引出主題，點(diǎn)出觀點(diǎn)．第二段：記敘，舉例子．第三段：議論，總結(jié)升華觀點(diǎn)，回應(yīng)開頭．同時(shí)寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．