Question

我市政府已決定對(duì)老城區(qū)進(jìn)行改造。多數(shù)居民支持政府決定，但也有人持反對(duì)態(tài)度。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)表在雜志上。
贊成  1、房子已太陳舊，影響市容。
2、主街人民路太擁擠，急需拓寬。
3、城市有整體規(guī)劃。
反對(duì)  1、位于鬧市區(qū)，生活方便，住慣了。
2、重建需大量資金，不如多投資新城開(kāi)發(fā)。
你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)
注意；1、詞數(shù)：100－120個(gè)。
2、文章的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
The government of our city has decided to rebuild the old city proper. Most of the citizens support this decision.

Answer 1

The government of our city has decided to rebuild the old city properly. Most of the citizens support this decision.
They think these houses are so old that they affect the appearance of the city. The main avenue, Renming Road, is already too crowded and it badly needs widening. What’s more, the city can be planned as a whole.
But still there are some who hold just the opposite view. They complain their houses are located in the busy shopping center, where life is convenient for them. They have become used to living there. Moreover, it needs a large sum of money to rebuild the city. It would be better to invest more in the development of the new city.
In my opinion, we must carry out the government’s decision to make our environment more comfortable and the city more beautiful

試題分析：本文屬于議論文中的正反觀點(diǎn)類短文。大部分的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。在表達(dá)對(duì)老城區(qū)進(jìn)行改造的觀點(diǎn)：應(yīng)該把舊城改造和新城的建設(shè)相集合。盡量節(jié)約，科學(xué)規(guī)劃。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn)時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語(yǔ)如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。