Question

【題目】假如你是李夏。你看到美國留學(xué)生Sharon在網(wǎng)上發(fā)貼，希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英語作為回報。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語給她寫一封電子郵件。

1．表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿；

2．說明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由；

3．給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議；

4．提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語的具體需求。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

Hi Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sharon,

This is Li Xia, I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning. I’m good at speaking standard Mandarin. I’ve been a broadcaster in the school broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As one saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English. I believe we both can make much progress with each other’s help.

Looking forward to your reply soon!

Yours,

Li Xia

【解析】

本文是提綱類作文寫作，要點(diǎn)已給出。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文采用常用的三段式，要點(diǎn)齊全，布局安排合理，層次分明，使用高級詞匯、短語和高級句式。I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.句中使用定語從句；I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning.動詞不定式作定語；When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin,當(dāng)談到……的時候，是固定句式；I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. suggest后面的賓語從句中運(yùn)用虛擬語氣（should）+動詞原形，同時句中還用了非限制性定語從句；As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.”as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，同時句中使用諺語；I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English.賓語從句體現(xiàn)句中。