Question

7．閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
To many people even the word"work"sounds unpleasant，not necessarily because they are lazy．The same man，who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office，may work hard at the weekend，painting the house or digging the garden．
What is the reason，then？In most cases，it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing．It does not give them any real satisfaction．It may be quite easy，like making up wooden boxes，but it is very boring．Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one，such as attaching a door handle to a car．But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say：I have made something!
Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized．No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect．Society cannot function a single day without the"dull and boring"jobs．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
Ⅰ．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
Ⅱ．以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)平凡工作的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）描述清潔工工作的艱辛；
（2）假如沒有清潔工，環(huán)境會(huì)變得如何？
（3）你對(duì)平凡工作者的看法．
[寫作要求]
Ⅰ．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
Ⅱ．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：compared with．（與…..作比較），suffer from（遭受），spread at a very quick speed（以很快的速度蔓延），I draw the conclusion（得出結(jié)論），go smoothly（流暢地進(jìn)行），insignificant（微不足道的）．

解答 In the passage，the author mainly stresses the importance of small and ordinary work，such as cleaning the street．Because of their essentiality for the organization of the society，he thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly．（概括）
There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is harder compared with any other jobs in the society．【高分句型】On one hand，they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are still in the sweet sleeping dreams．On the other hand，they also suffer from less respect and lower pay，working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow，wind heavily．【高分句型】（清潔工工作的艱辛）
Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city．Wherever we go，there is rubbish．Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish．Ever worse，if there were no change about that，disease would spread at a very quick speed．Is there anything that can be worse than this!（假如沒有清潔工，環(huán)境會(huì)變得如何）
From the above，I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job，such as cleaning the street，is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly．Consequently，those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respect as much as those being engineers or teachers．（對(duì)平凡工作者的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．