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19．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)的高中生李華，你校選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用周末的時(shí)間到幸福村輔導(dǎo)留守兒童（left-behind children）的英語(yǔ)，你希望參加此活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信：
●對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)●你的計(jì)劃
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua from Hongxing High School．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for left-behindchildren fromXingfu Villagewill be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
I think I am qualified for being the children's English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can attend the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)）
My plan for coaching the children is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer me the opportunity．（計(jì)劃）
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)的高中生李華，你校選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用周末的時(shí)間到幸福村輔導(dǎo)留守兒童（left-behind children）的英語(yǔ)，你希望參加此活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：●對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)●你的計(jì)劃2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導(dǎo)致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨(dú)立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．
As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】
What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm Li Hua from Hongxing High School．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for left-behind children from Xingfu Village will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)） 
       I think I am qualified for being the children's English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can attend the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)） 
      My plan for coaching the children is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer me the opportunity．（計(jì)劃） Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．