Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請認(rèn)真觀察下面的圖片，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)150左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文通順連貫;3.短文應(yīng)包括圖片中所有內(nèi)容。

Answer 1

【答案】As we can see in the picture, a boy sits in a cage like a bird, looking unhappily at his father, who sits opposite to him, looking puzzled on his face. There is a piece of paper which says “summer vacation”. The boy plans to go fishing, play football, climb mountains, go out for a ride and play chess. But the father keeps him in a cage for “safety” for fear of a car accident, drowning, falling off a tree, fighting or being deceived.

It reflects the way in which the parents protect their children from dangers while the children are growing up. Is it a good way to do that? I don’t agree. It seems to be safe staying in the cage. But the little boy will never know what a danger is and how to deal with it. So he may not adapt to the surroundings on his own in the future.

In my opinion, the parents should let their children out into nature to enlarge their knowledge and widen their sights during their holidays.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫作文。要求學(xué)生認(rèn)真觀察圖片，描繪出圖片中所有內(nèi)容并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

第一步，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容，確定時態(tài)。本文為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步，確定文章結(jié)構(gòu)。本文結(jié)構(gòu)為三段式：第一段描繪出圖片中所有內(nèi)容；第二段寫出圖片中隱含的意義；第三段表示自己的觀點。

第三步，列提綱。主要針對描繪圖片內(nèi)容部分列出重點單詞或短語：in a cage (在籠子里); sits opposite to sb. (坐在某人對面); a piece of paper (一張紙); go fishing (釣魚); climb mountains (爬山); go out for a ride (騎車出行); play chess (下象棋); car accident (車禍); drowning (溺死); falling off a tree (從樹上掉下來); fighting (打架); deceive (欺騙)

第四步，連詞成句，組句成文。

圖畫作文給考生自由發(fā)揮的空間比較大，對考生的綜合能力要求比較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的布局謀篇的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成圖畫作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或句型，在自己的能力范圍之內(nèi)，要適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂酶呒壘湫汀Ｍ瑫r要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，讓文章更加通順連貫。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以選用英文格言來提升文章層次。