Question

最近我校舉辦了一次英語書法比賽。大部分同學(xué)積極參與,但少數(shù)同學(xué)書寫不好,也不愿改善。請你根據(jù)以下提示,給二十一世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇短文,分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法。

現(xiàn)象：一些學(xué)生不善書寫,也不愿改善書寫

原因：1.可以借助電腦,沒有必要練字;

2.功課太忙,沒時(shí)間練字;

3.練字見效慢,很難練好。

你的看法：……

注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右；2.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life,

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Answer 1

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we held an English Handwriting Competition. Many students took an active part in the activity. However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting. The reasons are as follows:

On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.

In my view, Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves. What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。最近我校舉辦了一次英語書法比賽。大部分同學(xué)積極參與,但少數(shù)同學(xué)書寫不好,也不愿改善。請你根據(jù)以下提示,給二十一世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇短文,分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法�，F(xiàn)象：一些學(xué)生不善書寫,也不愿改善書寫

原因：1.可以借助電腦,沒有必要練字; 2.功課太忙,沒時(shí)間練字;3.練字見效慢,很難練好。[來需要寫的提綱已經(jīng)給出，需要就此寫一篇文章。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意詞數(shù)120左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting這里含有一個(gè)定語從句；On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句。On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. 這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類書面表達(dá)