高三年級(jí)是高中生活的最后一年， 這一年中，學(xué)生們面臨著沉重的升學(xué)壓力。因此，很多學(xué)生課間也坐教室里用功，但學(xué)習(xí)效率和成績(jī)并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾，F(xiàn)在就請(qǐng)你以“A Ten-minute Break”為題，按下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文，讓這些同學(xué)從中有所啟發(fā)。要點(diǎn)如下：

十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。 2．要注意適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⒎绞健?3．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。 注意：詞數(shù)120左右。

 

 

 

 

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, inste-ad of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

試題分析：本試題給定的題目是A Ten-minute Break，但是按照題目要求，是要告訴他們適當(dāng)?shù)男菹⑹欠浅Ｓ斜匾�。在這課間十分鐘內(nèi)，可能能夠?qū)憥椎李}目，但是高中生活壓力太大，放松的時(shí)間本來(lái)就少，如果能夠抓住這課間十分鐘休息一下，反倒能夠提高效率。

亮點(diǎn)分析：本文抓住了中心和重點(diǎn)，圍繞課間十分鐘能夠做的事情來(lái)對(duì)大家進(jìn)行一個(gè)號(hào)召。運(yùn)用了較多的短語(yǔ)如as a result ，in my opinion，insteadof，otherwise等來(lái)連接顯示了作者扎實(shí)的基本功。本文還運(yùn)用了主語(yǔ)從句如 What we need is to have a real rest來(lái)為本文增色。本文作者通過(guò)自己的親身經(jīng)歷來(lái)告訴大家，這十分鐘用來(lái)休息是非常有效的，增強(qiáng)文章說(shuō)服力。

問(wèn)題說(shuō)明：本文雖然運(yùn)用的特色詞匯較多，但是句式過(guò)于單一，沒(méi)有很多兩點(diǎn)，所以建議能夠添加一些復(fù)合句如定語(yǔ)從句等，還能加一些強(qiáng)調(diào)句或者倒裝句來(lái)增色。

考點(diǎn)：論述性文章寫(xiě)作。

 

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