Question

書面表達(dá)。

     假定你是李華，昨天學(xué)校為你們舉辦了十八歲成人儀式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給你在美國(guó)
的筆友發(fā)一封電子郵件，描述儀式過(guò)程并簡(jiǎn)述你的感受。
     1. 成人宣誓
     2. 感謝家長(zhǎng)和老師的教育和培養(yǎng)
     3. 老師送賀卡
     4. 學(xué)生表演節(jié)目
注意：
     1. 郵件必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
     2. 詞數(shù)：100左右。 
     參考詞匯：宣誓 make an oath
Dear Tom,
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                                                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                                                              Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version
Dear Tom,
     It is great to receive your email. Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we held a growing up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an
oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society fmm now on. Then we showed our
thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating
us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on
wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it's very important
for us. I will remember the day in my life.
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                                                                               Li Hua