Question

假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校最近開(kāi)展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的活動(dòng)。你們班為此組織主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談一談你對(duì)如何創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的一些想法。短文應(yīng)該包括下面的內(nèi)容：

1．安全意識(shí)的重要性；

2．在運(yùn)動(dòng)中要注意安全；

3．在校內(nèi)要注意人身安全；

4．同學(xué)間發(fā)生矛盾時(shí)，一定要保持冷靜、理智；

5．逐步將“平安校園”活動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)化為全體師生的實(shí)際行動(dòng)。

注意：

1．不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；

2．詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；

3．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

注釋：校園安全 safety at school

My dear classmates,

There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dear classmates,

There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.

I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.

As far as I’m concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind.Besides, we supposed to observe the law discipline where we are at any moment.

Thanks.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。