Question

15．假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分．
   My old classroom was interesting beca use three side of the classroom were made from glass．I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view．On the left-hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field．In the morning，it was full of the students exercising．The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid．Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them．Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains．On the right side of the class was the road，I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning．The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming．If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it．

Answer 1

分析 本文介紹了自己的教室．
我的老教室三面墻都是由玻璃制成的．我喜歡做在窗邊欣賞風景．左邊是足球場，那里上午有很多學生踢球．學校旁邊有一個公園，遠處有雪山．教室的右邊是一條馬路，我很有興趣看司機們忙忙碌碌著．盡管在那間教室里學習時，我只是一個孩子，我永遠忘不了它．

解答 My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass．I enjoyed sitclose to the windows and looking at the view．On the left-hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field．In the morning，it was full of the students exercising．The view from the back of the classroomisalso splendid．Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them．Farther in the distance，I couldnot enjoy the view of snowy mountains．On the right side of the class was the road，I was always interested to see the drivers in∧hurry in the morning．The position of the classroom with its view made me feltlike I was dreaming．IfI was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it．
解析：
1．【答案】第一句：side→sides【解析】名詞單復數誤用．side是可數名詞，前面有three修飾，side要改為sides．
2．【答案】第一句：from→of【解析】介詞誤用．由制成be made of能看出原材料，用from表示看不出原材料．本句表示"教室的三面墻都是由玻璃制成的"，是可以看出原材料，所以用be made of．
3．【答案】第二句：sit→sitting【解析】動詞形式錯誤．Enjoy后用v-ing形式．表示"喜歡做"
4．【答案】第三句：easy→easily【解析】詞性錯誤．此處修飾動詞see應用副詞，所以easy改為easily．
5．【答案】第五句：is→was【解析】時態(tài)錯誤．根據上下文，用過去時．所以要把is改為was．
6．【答案】第六句：them→it【解析】代詞誤用．此處指代前面提到的park，用單數．第六句：them→it代詞誤用．這里指代的是park，所以要把them改為it．
7．【答案】第七句：刪掉could后的not【解析】本句表示從遠處能欣賞到雪山美景．可知這里應該是表肯定，所以刪掉could后的not．
8．【答案】第九句：在hurry前加a【解析】考查固定搭配in a hurry急忙．
9．【答案】第十句：felt→feel【解析】考查使役動詞的用法． make sb．do sth．表示使某人做某事，所以felt要改為feel．
10．【答案】第十一句：if→Although/Though【解析】考查連詞的用法．根據句意"盡管在我讀書的時候我是一個小孩，但我不會忘記它．"表達讓步，而不是條件．而且翻譯為如果意思上也不通．

點評 考查短文改錯．
英文里的動詞和不同的介詞連用，含義也不同，例如本題的make of與make from兩者都常用在被動語態(tài)中，表示"某物由…構成的"．make of的原材料是看的到的，即平常我們說的物理現象．比如The chair is made of wood．椅子是由木頭做成的．而make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees．紙張是由木材做成的． 是一種化學變化，從紙上是看不出一棵樹的．