Question

20．假如你是李華，你和交流生Stephen所在的合唱隊（choir）進入了決賽．請給他寫一封電子郵件，告知這一信息，通知他訓練的時間和地點，并讓他推薦一首合唱的英文歌曲．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Stephen，
I'm very excited to tell you that our choir has succeeded in entering the final competition．
However，we still have a long way to go．So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）We sincerely hope that you can turn up on time．If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）
I'm sure with our joint efforts our choir will stand out in the final competition．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你和交流生Stephen所在的合唱隊（choir）進入了決賽．請給他寫一封電子郵件，告知這一信息，通知他訓練的時間和地點，并讓他推薦一首合唱的英文歌曲．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點：2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：succeed in在…方面成功； However然而；take place發(fā)生；turn up出現(xiàn)，到場；on time按時；stand out 出色；
So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）
It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）
If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Stephen，
      I'm very excited to tell you that our choir has succeeded in entering the final competition．
      However，we still have a long way to go．So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）We sincerely hope that you can turn up on time．If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）
      I'm sure with our joint efforts our choir will stand out in the final competition．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．