Question

【題目】James Bender, in his book How to Talk Well tells the story of a farmer who grew awardwinning corn.Each year he won a blue ribbon.One year a newspaper reporter interviewed him and learned something interesting about how he grew it.

The reporter discovered that the farmer shared his seed corn with his neighbors.“How can you afford to share your best seed corn with your neighbors when they are entering corn in competition with yours each year？” The reporter asked.“Why，” said the farmer, “didn't you know? The wind picks up pollen(花粉) from the ripening corn and carries it from field to field.If my neighbors grow bad corn, crosspollination(異花受粉) will slowly reduce the quality of my corn.If I am to grow good corn, I must help my neighbors grow good corn.”

He is very much aware of the connectedness of life.His corn cannot improve unless his neighbors' corn also improves.The lesson for each of us is this: If we are to grow good corn, we must help our neighbors grow good corn.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．突出：人與人之間本應(yīng)和睦相處、互幫互助、共同進(jìn)步；

2．以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

3．以約120詞發(fā)表你的看法，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識。

【寫作要求】

1．作文中可以使用實例來支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容論述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】A farmer always won a blue ribbon in the state fair every year.His secret is that he helped his neighbor grow good corn to grow his own corn better.

So is our life.People in the world cannot live by his or her self, not depending on others.Those who choose to live well should also help the poor to live well, for the value of a life is not measured by the wealth one gains but by what the life brings to others.In fact, we're all members of a big family.As a Chinese saying goes, “One for all and all for one.” Donating blood to others benefits the donator.Picking up rubbish in your neighborhood creates a tidy environment for all the residents.

Therefore, we should help each other and get along with each other to improve our lives.Only in this way can we get our dreams of living a harmonious life realized.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來，動筆前，一定要分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時注意運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】

本文共三段，內(nèi)容符合要求，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，同時文中使用高級詞匯和高級句子。His secret is that he helped his neighbor grow good corn to grow his own corn better.

that引導(dǎo)表語從句；People in the world cannot live by his or her self, not depending on others.現(xiàn)在分詞的否定式做伴隨狀態(tài)；Those who choose to live well should also help the poor to live well, for the value of a life is not measured by the wealth one gains but by what the life brings to others.在整個句子中who引導(dǎo)定語從句，for此處是并列連詞，以及what引導(dǎo)的介詞的賓語從句；Picking up rubbish in your neighborhood creates a tidy environment for all the residents.動名詞短語做主語；Only in this way can we get our dreams of living a harmonious life realized.部分倒裝運用經(jīng)典；另外，In fact, As a Chinese saying goes, “One for all and all for one.” Therefore,的運用為文章增色添彩。