Question

假如你是李曉華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友Bob來信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)江城的情況。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封回信�；匦彭毎�括下表中的內(nèi)容。

自然情況	①位于長江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住
成 ．就	②經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速 ③新建了不少工廠、住房、道路等。
存在問題	④水、空氣污染 ⑤交通擁擠
對(duì)江城發(fā)展的看法	⑥(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)

注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

2．詞數(shù)100左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì)economy n．

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob，

It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about me hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Yours，

Xiaohua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)部分可以從可持續(xù)發(fā)展等方面提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。