Question

我們能活在這美好、精彩的世界上，是因為有父母，老師，朋友。因此在每個人的生命之中應(yīng)懷有一顆感恩之心，學會感恩他人。 請從以下幾點展開寫一篇題目為Learn to Be Grateful 的文章。1.感恩父母；

2.感恩老師；

3.感恩朋友；

4.你認為，我們應(yīng)該做些什么.

提示：1、可加入一些細節(jié)， 使文章更加通順合理。

2、詞數(shù)：100字左右（開頭部分不計）

Learn to Be Grateful

Whenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Learn to Be Grateful

Whenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.

First of all, I would like to express thanks to my parents who give their endless love to me. As we know, parents do all they can to make their children’s life better and better. Secondly, I am grateful to my teachers for their selfless work. Why I admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also all kinds of important skills. Finally, I want to thank my fellow friends who share happiness and sorrow with me. Because of you, my life is filled with laughters and sunshine.

They are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them. Try to remember to give our sincere wishes to them now and then. Above all, we should try to work hard and live happily, which is a good pay for them.

【解析】

試題解析：

作文主要寫對父母、老師、朋友進行感恩，對此你認為我們應(yīng)該怎么做，要從三方面進行闡述，每個方面要寫出我們面對敢跟該怎么辦，知道要點內(nèi)容，把要點加以整理，用適當?shù)木湫瓦M行概括；概括時可以主要用簡單句，也可以適當用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。

考點：考查學生的綜合語言能力

點評：要認真審題，用正確的語言表示。切記要點要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。