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9．53年前，毛主席題詞"向雷鋒同志學(xué)習(xí)"，并把3月5日定為學(xué)雷鋒紀(jì)念日，最近你班學(xué)生就此話題展開討論：現(xiàn)代社會還要學(xué)雷鋒嗎？請你為�？瘜懜�，發(fā)表自己觀點(diǎn)．注意：1詞數(shù)：100左右；
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇討論關(guān)于雷鋒精神是否已經(jīng)過時的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一人們對學(xué)雷鋒活動的質(zhì)疑；二雷鋒精神的時代性；三自己的觀點(diǎn)．
高分句型：
1．To them nothing is more important than those things，which is often regarded as the views of the present generation．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句． is often regarded as 表示"被看做"．
對他們來說沒有什么比那些東西更重要了，這種看法被看做是目前這一代人的觀點(diǎn)．
2．There are some other voices  that the spirit of Lei Feng still has an enormous echo in millions of Chinese people．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)同位語從句，說明some other voices  的內(nèi)容．
還有人認(rèn)為雷鋒精神仍舊在我國人民中有很大的共鳴．

解答 53years ago，the chairman of China called on everybody to learn from Leifeng．However，there are some voices claiming Lei Feng's spirit has gone out of style in today's society．They think that economy people should seek more practical things，such as fame，money and the comfortable life．To them nothing is more important than those things，which is often regarded as the views of the present generation．【高分句型一】（人們對學(xué)雷鋒活動的質(zhì)疑）
There are some other voices  that the spirit of Lei Feng still has an enormous echo in millions of Chinese people．【高分句型二】The great soldier's story has such a strong influence on people's ideas，values and ways of life that in every field of society there arise countless"Living Lei Fengs"，who follow the example of Lei Feng and serve the people heart and soul．（雷鋒精神的時代性）
In my opinion，the spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date．Instead，it has been brought forward．Today more and more"Lei Fengs"are coming forth from various circles．The spirit of Lei Feng---an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward．（自己的觀點(diǎn)）

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