Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）
網(wǎng)購(gòu)已成為很多人青睞的一種現(xiàn)代購(gòu)物形式。請(qǐng)你以“Online Shopping”為題，根據(jù)以下三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，分三段寫(xiě)一篇100字左右的英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)購(gòu)現(xiàn)象及你的看法或建議
1.越來(lái)越多的人喜歡在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)買(mǎi)商品
2.網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物可能存在的問(wèn)題(如：假貨；貨物損壞；不易退換)
3.你的看法或建議
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：網(wǎng)店店主Internet shopping provider  假貨fake goods
Online Shopping
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Answer 1

不唯一
Online Shopping
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has become increasingly popular among us, and many young people prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to people when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the goods may not be as good as they are described.Secondly, it is possible for the buyers to buy fake goods. In addition, some people find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the things bought online.
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out for the Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising life of online shopping is just awaiting us.

試題分析：英語(yǔ)作文是高考英語(yǔ)的重頭戲，英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一個(gè)人英語(yǔ)綜合水平的體現(xiàn)。本篇寫(xiě)作題材是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，第一段為總述；第二段網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的存在的問(wèn)題。第三段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。寫(xiě)作是一個(gè)厚積薄發(fā)的過(guò)程，是一項(xiàng)將積累釋放于一時(shí)的過(guò)程。積累越深厚，釋放就越精彩；積累越科學(xué)，釋放就越有效。