Question

【題目】假如你是中學(xué)生李明，家住泉州。你的英國筆友Jason來信談到了他的故鄉(xiāng)London，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)泉州的情況。請你用英文寫一封回信。

回信必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

（1）自然情況：地理位置優(yōu)越、氣候風(fēng)景宜人等；

（2）發(fā)展成就：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速、城市高樓林立等；

（3）存在問題：交通擁堵現(xiàn)象、空氣污染問題等；

（4）對泉州發(fā)展的看法：內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定。

注意：

（1）請勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實信息；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；

（3）詞數(shù)不少于120；書信格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：高層建筑 high-rise building

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jason,

I’m more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.

Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built, high rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and charming city. However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people’s daily life. In my view, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people’s daily life.這句話運(yùn)用非限定性從句。In my view, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.這句話用了不定式作目的狀語。文章還用了一些短語，如：more than，such as，have a bad influence on，in one’s opinion，so that，in future等等。