Question

請以“Magic Power of Words”為題用英文按以下要點寫一篇100-120個詞的短文。

要點：1. 曾經(jīng)鼓勵我的一句話；

2. 這句話對我生活的影響。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Magic  Power  of  Words

My hardest class in high school was my physical education. We often played volleyball. All the other students were good at it, but I wasn’t. One afternoon, the teacher asked me to hit the ball to my classmates. I was so terrified that I would make a fool of myself. One of the boys on my team saw how nervous I was. He walked up to me and whispered, “Come on, you can do it.”

You can’t imagine how those words of encouragement made me feel. I was so happy; I almost cried. I managed to hit the ball.

I have never forgotten his kind words of encouragement. Whenever things aren’t going well, I think of those simple words: Come on, you can do it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇記敘文的寫作，記敘一句鼓勵的話對自己的影響，寫作前首先要對這件事進行構(gòu)思，然后寫作時要注意寫作順序，時態(tài)，句子連貫等問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的句型，使用一些高級詞匯和高級句型使文章看起來有檔次。

考點：語言組織能力。

點評：記敘文寫作注意記敘文的寫作要素，時間，地點，事件等。考生平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文。