Question

2．學(xué)校英文報(bào)社正在進(jìn)行題目為"My Favorite Proverb"的征文活動(dòng)．請根據(jù)圖中諺語（proverb）寫一篇英語短文，給英語校報(bào)投稿．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．你的理解和看法：
2．舉例說明理由．

注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
My Favorite Proverb
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Answer 1

分析 本文是"圖片+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章圖片和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，闡述對圖中諺語（proverb）的理解和看法并舉例說明．既是看圖作文又是提綱類作文．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．對該諺語的理解；2．舉例說明理由；
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．
重要短語：inspire sb to do sth （鼓舞某人做某事），achieve great success（取得巨大成功），at the very beginning（在一開始），illustrate sth（解釋某物），began to do sth （開始做某事），used to do （過去曾經(jīng)做某事），make mistakes（犯錯(cuò)誤），give it up （放棄），encourage sb to do（鼓勵(lì)某人做某事），keep sth on（繼續(xù)做某事），not only…，but also…（不但，而且），in public（在公共場所），talk with sb fluently（流利地與某人交談）．
【高分句型一】
1．"Practice makes perfect！"is my favorite proverb，which has inspired me to achieve great success．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．Whatever we do，we can not do it well at the very beginning．
此處是由連接代詞"whatever"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，可以理解為"No matter what we do"，主句為"we can not do it well at the very beginning"．
【高分句型三】
3．However，the more we practice，the better we will do it，just as the proverb illustrates．
此處是"The+形容詞比較級+主語+謂語，the+形容詞比較級+主語+謂語"，意為"越來…越…"
【高分句型四】
4．It was my teacher who encouraged me to keep it on．
此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，如果去掉強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，原句句子成分齊全，句意通順．
【高分句型五】
5．Later，not only can I speak English in public，but also I can talk with foreigners fluently．
此處是由部分倒裝句型，結(jié)構(gòu)為"not only+一般疑問句形式，but also+句子"，即"not only"引導(dǎo)的句子需倒裝，而"but also"引導(dǎo)的句子不需倒裝．

解答 My Favorite Proverb
"Practice makes perfect！"is my favorite proverb，which has inspired me to achieve great success．【高分句型一】As we know，the proverb mentioned above is very simple to understand．Whatever we do，we can not do it well at the very beginning．【高分句型二】However，the more we practice，the better we will do it，just as the proverb illustrates．【高分句型三】（你的理解和看法）
   When I began to speak English，I used to make mistakes．And I wanted to give it up．It was my teacher who encouraged me to keep it on．【高分句型四】"Practice makes perfect！"was repeated around me．Later，not only can I speak English in public，but also I can talk with foreigners fluently．【高分句型五】（舉例說明理由）
   Such is my favorite proverb，a simple but an effective one．

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．