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4．假如你是李明，來(lái)自美國(guó)的交換生Martin 在過(guò)去的一個(gè)月在你們學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)生活．現(xiàn)在即將返回美國(guó)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇?dú)g送詞．
1．贊揚(yáng)他是一位善良友好，樂(lè)于助人的男孩，而且籃球也打得很好；
2．非常懷念和他相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光；
3．感謝他對(duì)大家的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；
4．希望他再次有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)到中國(guó)成都，到時(shí)一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：名勝古跡 places of interest and historical sites
Dear teachers and friends，
I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．
．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．
True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇?dú)g送詞．感覺(jué)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明主題；二贊揚(yáng)Martin的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，懷念和他相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光并且感謝他對(duì)大家的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；三希望他再次有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)到中國(guó)成都，到時(shí)一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．高分句型：1．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．句子里 who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句 is good at playing basketball，代指先行詞a very kind，helpful and friendly boy．是一位善良友好，樂(lè)于助人的男孩，他籃球也打得很好．
2．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．句子里Whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句 we have trouble learning English，表示"無(wú)論何時(shí)"； hesitate to表示"猶豫去做"；since引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句 he came to our class，表示"自從"．只要我們英語(yǔ)有困難，他總是毫不遲疑的幫助我們．所以自從他來(lái)到我們班，我們的英語(yǔ)已經(jīng)被提高了許多．

解答 Dear teachers and friends
     I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．（點(diǎn)明主題）Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．【高分句型一】I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．【高分句型二】We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．（贊揚(yáng)Martin的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，懷念和他相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光并且感謝他對(duì)大家的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助）
    True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．（希望他再次有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)到中國(guó)成都，到時(shí)一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．）
    That's all．Thank you!

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