Question

書面表達（共20分）

近年來，各地的水污染問題引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注。請就以下要點寫一篇短文。

水污染的影響；

水污染的原因；

你的看法。

要求：

詞數(shù)150左右，首句不計入總詞數(shù)；

可以適當(dāng)拓展，語句要通順，層次要分明；

書寫工整、美觀。

In recent years, the water pollution has become the focus of people’s concern.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In recent years, the water pollution has become the focus of people’s concern. As a result of the pollution, many local people have no access to clean tap water. If the pollution can’t be controlled, people’s health will be in danger. Worse still, it has a bad effect on the environment, killing almost all the fish or wildlife in or along rivers. The reasons are not hard to find. First, we take what we get from nature for granted without the slightest awareness of protecting the rivers we depend on. Second, with the economic growth, more and more waste materials have been poured into water.

Actually, it is just like killing the goose that lays the golden egg. There is no denying that urgent measures should be taken to prevent the situation going from bad to worse. Not only should the chemical companies along the river be abolished, but people’s awareness of water protection should also be promoted. Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以水污染問題為切入點寫一篇短文。作文寫作要點包括：水污染帶來的影響；造成水污染的原因；自己的看法。詞數(shù)在150左右，注意首句不計入總詞數(shù)；不能照抄照搬要點，要進行適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，使語句通順，使作文有層次。書寫力求美觀，不出現(xiàn)拼寫和標點錯誤。

亮點說明：

范文使用了很多重難點語法：非謂語動詞killing almost all the fish or wildlife；賓語從句what we get；定語從句we depend on；固定句型There is no denying that urgent measures should be taken；倒裝Not only should the chemical companies...，Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.等，語法知識的使用，豐富了作文的內(nèi)容，更好地表達了作者的心聲；

范文注意使用Worse still, First,Second, Actually等來銜接前后句，使作文聯(lián)系緊密，銜接緊湊；

范文使用了大量的短語：As a result of，have no access to，in danger，has a bad effect on，the awareness of，take ...for granted，depend on，from bad to worse等，使作文內(nèi)容生動、充實。

考點：材料類作文