Question

8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的單詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下寫出修改后的單詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
With the national college entrance examination approach，many students are so worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness．It's a fairly common phenomena among us students．Here is some effective methods for you to adopt．
First of all，you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test．Secondly，it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions．I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress．Last but not least，you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind．Follow my tips，but you will overcome your exam anxiety．

Answer 1

分析 這篇短文是作者給即將參加高考的同學(xué)的一些建議．高考臨近，很多同學(xué)緊張地晚上睡不著覺，有的甚至得了精神疾病，
作者認(rèn)為考試前要做好成分的準(zhǔn)備，當(dāng)感到緊張時(shí)可以通過深呼吸來放松自己，還有就是要相信自己，保持一個(gè)良好的狀態(tài)，
這樣的話就能順利通過考試的．

解答 With the national college entrance examination approach，many students are so worried about the coming exam to 
                                                                   approaching                           too
fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness．It's a fairly common phenomena among us students．
                                                            mental
Here issome effective methods for you to adopt．First of all，you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test．
       are                                                                                                       去掉 a
Secondly，itis no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions．I think take a deep breath is a helpful way
               there                                                                                                   taking
to reduce your stress．Last but not least，you ought to believe∧yourself and keep a good state of mind．Follow my tips
                                                                                            in   yourselves
，but you will overcome your exam anxiety．
  and
1．a(chǎn)pproach改為approaching；考查with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，with+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語，這里approaching作examination的補(bǔ)足語．
2．so改為too；考查too…to…結(jié)構(gòu)意為"如此…以至于"，學(xué)生太緊張了，以至于睡不著覺．
3．mentally改為mental；考查形容詞，這里修飾名詞illness，所以用形容詞形式．
4．is改為are；考查系動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞后面的名詞是some effective methods，為復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以用are．
5．去掉plenty前面的a；考查固定短語，plenty of是固定用法，意為"許多，大量"．
6．it改為there；考查句式結(jié)構(gòu)，這里是固定的there be結(jié)構(gòu)．
7．take改為taking；考查動(dòng)名詞的用法，這里動(dòng)名詞短語taking a deep breath 作句子的主語．
8．believe后面加in；考查介詞，believe in固定搭配，意為"信任"．
9．yourself 改為yourselves；考查反身代詞的復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)上下文，主語you應(yīng)當(dāng)指的是"你們"，所以后面的反身代詞要用復(fù)數(shù)．
10．but改為and；考查連詞，這里是"祈使句+and+簡單句"句型，聽從我的建議，你就會(huì)克服考試焦慮癥，所以用but．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀全文，掌握短文的中心思想，然后運(yùn)用所掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)詳細(xì)分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子成分，找出文中的
錯(cuò)誤并加以修改．