Question

書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
高考即將來(lái)臨，家長(zhǎng)們也在想方設(shè)法為孩子做好服務(wù)。下面一幅圖是關(guān)于某些家長(zhǎng)的做法，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕睦斫�。短文必須包括以下�?nèi)容：
1. 圖畫內(nèi)容反映了什么？
2.你對(duì)家長(zhǎng)做法的看法。
3.你的建議。

注意：1、必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2、詞數(shù)150左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
3、文中不得提及你所在學(xué)校與本人姓名。
參考詞匯：倒計(jì)時(shí)牌          a countdown board 
過(guò)度關(guān)心和監(jiān)管    excessive care and supervision
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, parents are making great efforts to help their child to prepare for it.
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Answer 1

With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, parents are making great efforts to help their child to prepare for it. As is seen in the cartoon, Dad is setting a countdown board, saying that the college entrance examination is 11 days away, while mum is cheering the daughter “Come on!”. What is illustrated in the picture is that parents expect too much of their child and try every means to encourage her to work harder. However, the daughter feels unhappy, or rather more stressed.
As far as I’m concerned, what the parents think is right, but what they do is wrong. Some students feel stressed at school with the time approaching. When they get home, the countdown board and mother’s words will cause them to become more stressed, which has a bad effect on their moods. As a result, they can’t focus on the study.
So it’s necessary that parents know what their child needs most at this critical moment. Giving excessive care and supervision only add to the child’s anxiety. It is a regular routine that helps to promote quality revision. Besides, parents should provide relaxing atmosphere for study.
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