20．下面短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I had a interesting dream last night．I dreamed that I took part in a race．At first，I could not to run very fast and fell behind．So I didn't lose heart and kept running．All the students on the playground cheer me on，"Come on!"I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners．I felt as if flying like a superman．In the end，I got to the finishing line first．I won the race．I felt very proudly of myself．Many of my classmate threw me up into the air．Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!

分析 本文主要講述作者參加了賽跑比賽．起先，作者跑得不是很快，但并沒(méi)有失去信心，操場(chǎng)上的同學(xué)都在為作者鼓勁．于是，作者跑得越來(lái)越快，最終追了上來(lái)，獲得了第一名．作者為此感到自豪，正在那里，作者醒了，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己還在床上．

解答 I had a interesting dream last night．I dreamed that I took part in a race．At first，I could not to run very fast and fell behind．So I didn't lose heart and kept running．All the students on the playground cheer me on，"Come on!"I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up∧all the other runners．I felt as if flying like a superman．In the end，I got to the finishing line first．I won the race．I felt very proudly of myself．Many of my classmate threw me up into the air．Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)改為an 考查冠詞．dream是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指，因interesting讀音以發(fā)元音開(kāi)頭，用不定冠詞an．
2．去掉to 考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞．情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面直接接動(dòng)詞原形．
3．So改為But 前后兩個(gè)分句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非因果關(guān)系，用連詞but．
4．cheer改為cheered 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
5．encouraging改為encouraged 考查過(guò)去分詞．過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)，多半用來(lái)表示人物所處的心理狀態(tài)或情感變化，其主語(yǔ)多半是人．
6．fast改為faster 考查副詞比較級(jí)．faster and faster意為"越來(lái)越快"，都應(yīng)該使用比較級(jí)．
7．加with 考查固定搭配．catch up with意為"追上，趕上"，是固定搭配．
8．proudly改為proud 考查形容詞．feel是連系動(dòng)詞，后接形容詞作表語(yǔ)．
9．classmate改為classmates 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．many of…意為"許多…"后接名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10．me改為myself 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：發(fā)現(xiàn)自己還在床上．用反身代詞myself．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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