【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部舉行征文大賽，要求參賽學(xué)生介紹一件自己珍藏的物品（如書(shū)信、禮物、照片等）。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇字?jǐn)?shù)為100-120的參賽稿，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1. 如何得到這件物品；

2. 這件物品對(duì)于你的意義。

注意: 短文中，不得以任何形式透露本人和學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息。

【答案】

When it comes to the thing that I treasure most, jumping into my mind is a book Three days to see. It was a gift from mother, who is always willing to help me. There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study suffered a lot. Instead of scolding me, Mother gave me a book and asked me to read it. Hardly had I finished a few pages when I was greatly attracted by Helen Keller. Despite her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieved a lot. It was her determination and courage that made her a huge success.

When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also accomplish what Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ears whenever I see the book, inspiring me to face the challenge in life.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題：介紹一件自己珍藏的物品，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。常規(guī)寫(xiě)法，本文首先應(yīng)該點(diǎn)明這件物品。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：When it comes to當(dāng)談到....，jumping into跳入，was addicted to沉溺于，Because of因?yàn)�，Instead of代替，abandon拋棄，ring in，本文句式多變the thing that I treasure most定語(yǔ)從句，jumping into my mind is a book倒裝句，who is always willing to help me定于從句，Hardly had I finished a few pages when I was greatly attracted by Helen Keller倒裝句，It was her determination and courage that made her a huge success.強(qiáng)調(diào)句。

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