Question

假如你是李明， 你已經(jīng)在新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了3個(gè)月，你的筆友Steve來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你的學(xué)習(xí)生活各方面的情況。請(qǐng)你向他寫(xiě)一封回信。
1.分享你在這3個(gè)月中所遇到的困難（新環(huán)境新同學(xué)，學(xué)習(xí)上的難度，想家等）
2.如何在老師及同學(xué)的幫助下成功克服它們，慢慢融入新的班級(jí)。
要求：字?jǐn)?shù) 100-120
想家 homesick
Dear Steve,
Many thanks for your concern. _____________________________________________
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Looking forward to your telling me your study life.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Steve,
Many thanks for your concern. I am glad to share with you my sorrow and success of my  life in the new school this term. When I first came to this new school, I found everything was new to me and I was at a loss. Besides, the study was getting more difficult than before. What’s worse, sometimes I was so homesick that I felt lonely and even began to lose heart.
Fortunately, with the help of my teachers, I got through all the trouble. In addition, thanks to my new helpful classmates，I managed to become a confident member of the new class. Now, I am proud to tell you that I am making progress every day!
Looking forward to your telling me you study life.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文，本文的文字提示只是給出了部分內(nèi)容，很大一部分都要靠考生自己去篩選和組織，在講述自己遇見(jiàn)的困難時(shí)，要選取典型的事件，選取最能體現(xiàn)3個(gè)月中所遇見(jiàn)的困難。寫(xiě)作時(shí)使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句式讓文章充滿變化，特別注意所選詞匯要符合書(shū)信的特點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)作文的關(guān)鍵在于要把提綱里的所有要點(diǎn)都包括在文章之內(nèi)，不能有任何的遺漏，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，讓文章不要那么的平淡，提高文章的檔次。