【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10 處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear friends,

May I have you attention, please? I'm going to talk about something focusing in Protecting Wildlife. So far millions of species have died off or, have endangered mainly for two reasons. For one thing, man has been killing them for food or other commercial reasons. Take antelopes for example. Poachers hunt them for their fur, that can be made into luxurious shawls. For another, human civilization has been developing very fast that man has invaded and destroyed wild animals' natural habitats. Human activity have greatly threatened their existence. If all the wild animals disappear one day from the planet, humans would feel lonely. The world is beautiful for its diversity. Besides, some animals are extreme useful in the field of science, while others are especially adorable, unique, and keep us a good company. However, we should learn to share the earth with them. Thank you for your time.

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【解析】1. 考查代詞。修飾名詞用形容詞性物主代詞，不能用人稱代詞。故you改為your。

2. 考查介詞。句意：我將要討論的事情集中在保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物上。focus on“集中”，是常用搭配。故in改為on。

3. 考查動(dòng)詞。endangered“瀕危的”是形容詞，需加be動(dòng)詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)so far可知，此處使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故have后加been。

4. 考查定語從句。which can be made into luxurious shawls是非限制性定語從句，先行詞是 fur，在從句中作主語，指物，用關(guān)系代詞which，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制定語從句。故that改為which。

5. 考查固定句型。句意：再則，人類文明一直發(fā)展的非�？煲灾掠谌祟惽致院推茐牧艘吧鷦�(dòng)物的自然棲息地。so…that…是固定搭配，表示“如此……以致于……”。故very改為so。

6. 考查名詞。activity“活動(dòng)”是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)have可知，此處應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，故activity改為activities。

7. 考查動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)后半句謂語動(dòng)詞would feel可知，此處使用了與將來相反的虛擬語氣，因此if條件句謂語動(dòng)詞使用一般過去時(shí)或者should+動(dòng)詞原形。故disappear改為disappeared/should disappear。

8. 考查副詞。extremely作狀語修飾形容詞useful，作狀語用副詞。故extreme改為extremely。

9. 考查冠詞。company“陪伴”是不可數(shù)名詞，keep sb. company“陪伴某人”是常用短語。故去掉good前的a。

10. 考查連詞。上文提到“動(dòng)物是有用的、特別可愛的、獨(dú)一無二的、陪伴我們的”，因此我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)與他們共享地球，上下文是因果關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故However改為Therefore/Thus/Hence。

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