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3．研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，結(jié)識志趣相同的朋友，建立良好的社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)，有益于我們的身心健康．但生活中，有一些人在情緒低落時不愿與人吐露．請根據(jù)你對右側(cè)兩幅圖的理解，以"You Are Not Alone"為題，用英語寫一篇作文．
你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；
2．舉例說明你的經(jīng)歷和做法；
3．提出你的建議．
注意：
1．可參照圖片適當發(fā)揮；
2．作文詞數(shù)150左右；
3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
參考詞匯：mask （面具）   negative emotions （消極情緒）
You Are Not AloneAll of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions．But in Picture 1，the person tends to hide his negative emotions behind a mask．Luckily，in Picture 2，he gets over his negative feelings after talking to a friend．
In fact，everyone has different things that put them in negative emotions．For example，I used to feel nervous and worried before exams and become sad or disappointed if the grades weren't satisfying．But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out（高分句型一）．
Avoiding negative emotions is impossible．Yetmaking changes in our life can cut down on negative emotionsand having friendships can give us confidence that we matter（高分句型二）．Therefore，we should learn to become open to others．When we open our hearts and open our minds，new experiences will open up for us．（150 words）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out
但每次我生氣了，我會求助我的老師、我的父母或朋友，他們總是及時的幫助我．
高分句型二：
Yet making changes in our life can cut down on negative emotions and having friendships can give us confidence that we matter．
但我們生活的變化可以減少負面情緒和友誼能給我們信心．

解答 One possible version：
You Are Not Alone
All of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions．But in Picture 1，the person tends to hide his negative emotions behind a mask．Luckily，in Picture 2，he gets over his negative feelings after talking to a friend．
In fact，everyone has different things that put them in negative emotions．For example，I used to feel nervous and worried before exams and become sad or disappointed if the grades weren't satisfying．But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out（高分句型一）．
Avoiding negative emotions is impossible．Yet making changes in our life can cut down on negative emotions and having friendships can give us confidence that we matter（高分句型二）．Therefore，we should learn to become open to others．When we open our hearts and open our minds，new experiences will open up for us．（150 words）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．